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Monday, September 6, 2021

Asteroidia Advertisement

 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Elliot, Great use of persuasive writing, I'm intrigued and want to know more about Asteroidia. I wonder if there is a follow up slide, did the person on the couch go to Asteroidia?

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  2. Hi elliot, I love how you made it look like the advertizing guy made a hole in the wall. I saw your other post on your Vectary astroidia diagram, and loved that too! Maybe you could make it a bit longer, I wonder if the person on the sofa might move to astroidia. Or maybe if you did another advertizing post, you could make a better reason to do whatever it is you're advertizing.

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